I was heading to the car with my dad and my dog went out of the door. But where did she go and her name is Maizie. We went to look for her but we did not find her so we put up posters I will round the area. I was at home when a knock at the door we won’t expecting anything, so I opened the door and there was a box. I shouted she is here and my dad said who is here, I said maizie and he was like whatttttt. So we called mum up and she was so surprise.
Hey Lydia there are few spelling mistakes. But over all it was really interesting. Keep writing.